Wednesday, November 12, 2008

moment

november 12 2008



Prompts are:

Blush
Quiver
Tenderness

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Behind the blush of sunset
the cold of the night reaches full quiver
when the tenderness of the moon
breaks the dark sky

silence crumbles white
under my feet




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10 comments:

  1. Very nicely done. I like the way the first line captures the whole feeling.

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  2. This poem is just lovely! The words fit seamlessly. Masterful work.

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  3. Nicely done! I particularly like 'silence crumbles white' - it's a strong and visual phrase.

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  4. Wow, you just wrote about my walk tonight! Love those last two lines! And that moon. Did you see it tonight?

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  5. the change of day to night never sounds so poetic

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